Soul of Couple

Love ensures splendid goal
Love always purifies our soul
Soul is inviolate
Soul perfumes best
Best friends join your race 
Best practice  is seed of success
Success brings pleasure
Success we need ever
Ever you smile best for me
Ever my heart jump with glee
Glee I harvest from your lips
Glee, that makes me fine & fit
Fit me within your eyes
Fit to scan all lies
Lie is ever white
Lie always invites dark night
Night is for dreaming at rest
Night I ever erase from your heart
Heart I select for me
Heart, that works as my key
Key to success, we need
Key should lock  our greed
Greed invites failure
Greed, we should kill before it enters
Enter me with soft silky covet
Enter to sanctify our nest
Nest that I build for you
Nest i.e beautiful like spring's hue
Hue you ever housed in your thought 
Hue, that I always ready to paint
Paint with your lips freezing my cheeks with palm
Paint me, fixing tight with your arm
Arm you need to ensure your safety
Arm that I have, never compromise duty
Duty is god, you know very well
Duty, if we neglect, it will ring our bell
Bell always rings before tongue slipping
Bell we need to strengthen our coupling
Coupling you made so tight & strong
Coupling that ever smiles for a long
Long long ago,  I dreamed for a queen
Long live our love, transparent like rain
Rain like tear  I hate ever
Rain in winter we need never
Never choose drumstick tree to fix our dangle
Never try to frail our well bonded couple 
Couple always  sleep within heavenly lap
Couple that we made to add success in our cap
Cap my head with your chilled ice palm
Lap me please.... after forming a single soul within four arms.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Allison Avatar
December 16, 2016 at 4:40 AM
Your beautiful poem builds up brilliantly. I have never tried this form its too challenging for me!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
Robinson Jr. Avatar
November 28, 2016 at 11:36 PM
Cool and very powerful poem, Manmath. The employment of the blitz form to amplify message is pure creative genius. Excellent poem, well expressed ideas of love and unity. Ty for this thoughtful treat. Love and peace. RW (Romantic Warrior)
Johnston Avatar
November 23, 2016 at 3:00 AM
like an incantation...! very powerful.
De Yecouba Avatar
November 11, 2016 at 7:24 AM
Great
Lazey Avatar
November 8, 2016 at 5:32 AM
Great job on the poem. Really liked the supposedly fast but actually not kind of flow to it.
Vaso Avatar
October 30, 2016 at 9:28 PM
Beautiful poem!
Murray Avatar
October 29, 2016 at 9:42 AM
What a great idea and how well done Manmath.
Kannan Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 9:54 AM
Nicely penned...This is great...A big 7...
Dalei Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Thank u a lot for ur visit & nice comment.
Trifiatis Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 8:20 AM
A ladder of feelings and emotions that lead to the apex of the glorification of love: The union of souls! Marvelous dear, Manmath! A huge seven!
Dalei Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Thank u a lot for ur visit & nice comment.
Bateman Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 3:05 PM
Hello Manmath!! Thanks for your recent comment on "Autumn's Kiss." A Big Seven on this one my good friend. Your use of the "Blitz" format to develop and build-out this marvelous theme in "Soul of Couple" is truly perfect!! Superb Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
Dalei Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 12:24 PM
Thank u a lot for ur visit & nice comment.
Pan Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 10:05 AM
This remind me of some Indian films that I really enjoyed, nice job indeed!
Dalei Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 12:23 PM
Thank u a lot.
Pan Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 10:07 AM
This reminds me of some Indian films that I really enjoyed, nice job indeed!
Sands Avatar
October 22, 2016 at 8:56 AM
Good expression in your work. :)
Dalei Avatar
October 24, 2016 at 12:23 PM
Thank u a lot.
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