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Soul of Couple

Love ensures splendid goal Love always purifies our soul Soul is inviolate Soul perfumes best Best friends join your race Best practice is seed of success Success brings pleasure Success we need ever Ever you smile best for me Ever my heart jump with glee Glee I harvest from your lips Glee, that makes me fine & fit Fit me within your eyes Fit to scan all lies Lie is ever white Lie always invites dark night Night is for dreaming at rest Night I ever erase from your heart Heart I select for me Heart, that works as my key Key to success, we need Key should lock our greed Greed invites failure Greed, we should kill before it enters Enter me with soft silky covet Enter to sanctify our nest Nest that I build for you Nest i.e beautiful like spring's hue Hue you ever housed in your thought Hue, that I always ready to paint Paint with your lips freezing my cheeks with palm Paint me, fixing tight with your arm Arm you need to ensure your safety Arm that I have, never compromise duty Duty is god, you know very well Duty, if we neglect, it will ring our bell Bell always rings before tongue slipping Bell we need to strengthen our coupling Coupling you made so tight & strong Coupling that ever smiles for a long Long long ago, I dreamed for a queen Long live our love, transparent like rain Rain like tear I hate ever Rain in winter we need never Never choose drumstick tree to fix our dangle Never try to frail our well bonded couple Couple always sleep within heavenly lap Couple that we made to add success in our cap Cap my head with your chilled ice palm Lap me please.... after forming a single soul within four arms.

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Date: 12/16/2016 4:40:00 AM
Your beautiful poem builds up brilliantly. I have never tried this form its too challenging for me!!!:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/28/2016 11:36:00 PM
Cool and very powerful poem, Manmath. The employment of the blitz form to amplify message is pure creative genius. Excellent poem, well expressed ideas of love and unity. Ty for this thoughtful treat. Love and peace. RW (Romantic Warrior)
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Date: 11/23/2016 3:00:00 AM
like an incantation...! very powerful.
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Date: 11/11/2016 7:24:00 AM
Great
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Date: 11/8/2016 5:32:00 AM
Great job on the poem. Really liked the supposedly fast but actually not kind of flow to it.
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Date: 10/30/2016 9:28:00 PM
Beautiful poem!
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Date: 10/29/2016 9:42:00 AM
What a great idea and how well done Manmath.
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Date: 10/24/2016 9:54:00 AM
Nicely penned...This is great...A big 7...
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 10/24/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thank u a lot for ur visit & nice comment.
Date: 10/24/2016 8:20:00 AM
A ladder of feelings and emotions that lead to the apex of the glorification of love: The union of souls! Marvelous dear, Manmath! A huge seven!
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 10/24/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thank u a lot for ur visit & nice comment.
Date: 10/22/2016 3:05:00 PM
Hello Manmath!! Thanks for your recent comment on "Autumn's Kiss." A Big Seven on this one my good friend. Your use of the "Blitz" format to develop and build-out this marvelous theme in "Soul of Couple" is truly perfect!! Superb Work!! Cheers and Best, Gary
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 10/24/2016 12:24:00 PM
Thank u a lot for ur visit & nice comment.
Date: 10/22/2016 10:05:00 AM
This remind me of some Indian films that I really enjoyed, nice job indeed!
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 10/24/2016 12:23:00 PM
Thank u a lot.
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Xuefeng Pan
Date: 10/22/2016 10:07:00 AM
This reminds me of some Indian films that I really enjoyed, nice job indeed!
Date: 10/22/2016 8:56:00 AM
Good expression in your work. :)
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Manmath Dalei
Date: 10/24/2016 12:23:00 PM
Thank u a lot.

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