Soul of a Sinner, Life of a Loser

This rhapsody is for that rotten-minded man
Whose life is lingering among thorns and thistles;
He is clothed in crimson, caged in the cell of Satan
Because he neglected the voices of angels and apostles

All day long in the stream of sin he swims,
Wining and dining in weariness and woe;
Singing and dancing when he ought to scream
For the Lord to save him from the fiery foe

He’s blind to the signs and stars in the skies,
His ears are tied to the tempting tales of throng;
Every season, he is laden with the luggage of lies
Because he is deaf to the savior’s sincere song

His soul is soiled and his mind is messed up,
His heart is haughty… like the faded flower he’ll fall;
He’s got a beautiful body but his life is locked up
Because he refuse to hearken to Christ’s clarion call
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Johnson Avatar
July 1, 2010 at 9:23 PM
Great work adeleke. congratulations on your hm. Love,Joyce
Haick Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 8:35 PM
Congratulations on your HM Adeleke! This is outstanding but sad. So many of us are locked up in cells we've created. Thanks for the honor given to me by your choosing my poem as one of the winning ones in your sponsored contest! Thanks for the kind, encouraging comments also. Love, Peace, Audrey
Mehta Avatar
June 30, 2010 at 8:31 PM
Congrats on the HM win,Adeleke
Dietrich Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 9:40 PM
GReat topic you chose, Adeleke. Congratulations!
Freeman Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 10:28 AM
Congratulations, Adeleke, on your worthy poem's success. Agape, Moses
Brown Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 9:10 AM
Congratulations Adeleke on your win in Paula Swanson's contest "Fill In The Blanks" Love, Carol
Culverhouse Avatar
June 26, 2010 at 3:25 PM
great message!! Evangical, so you are a believer. Do you live in the USA?
Fox Avatar
June 25, 2010 at 12:14 PM
God save me, let me travel with this man, sounds a lot of fun. God save me, and may I, like him die a happy man!
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June 25, 2010 at 10:19 AM
Awesome write,,, very well expressed... what do you think if the devil would open his eyes to Jesus??What do you think would come of that??lol that's just something I pondered on while reading your write,, enjoyed your write....P.D.
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