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Written: January 07, 2024 _________________________________________ eyes are soul gates      even in disguise      they do not lie visual cues that transcend verbal expression but it also shares one's mood      with lenticular opiates spanning an effluvium-trail-laden sky select a person and share eye contact     while whimpering gaze might betray a false grin          quoth-trust aegis stupendous azure eyes!     aggregations of night elixir spellbind the world with      an aura of simmering wispy pearls in her eyes—soul rises without adronitis I cross cosmic cloisters and Eden's bright bower I grip men truths in their odd      dismal ways the sheer number of words is overwhelming once cupid arrows hit    a cosmic glow covers the world glorious       as sharpness of your sight      and dawn dew her azure eyes purify and calm me      as oceanic waves no drift inbred    ocean fowls flutter     feel felicity  ethereal eyes whisper to my soul sparkling with glee pristine eyes hypnosis     a wish for propinquity shine  as the sun rises      shards of light reveal her eyes dreams sap my mind       cocoons and eyes beguile me after inhaling and kissing goldenly—all else is plain all the grace I skipped—in the sun wind and rain as dew at dawn chatoyant eyes embrace you butterfly-like in gestalt     despite a sanguine heartbeat those eyes are as sibilant as the rising sun they send doves soaring      and senses roaring        some eyes are drenched in love until they sparkle delphic soul shy—untamed    my love never defamed grateful for blue skies—for all—and blue eyes for you

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Date: 1/12/2024 1:11:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement in the contest...You've done well today.
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Date: 1/12/2024 10:14:00 AM
- Back with a congratulations, well deserved, Las :) - hugs
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Date: 1/12/2024 5:25:00 AM
Congratulations dr sotto! Well deserved win! I loved this poem! And its good to see you score high with this poem
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Date: 1/12/2024 4:37:00 AM
An amazing Poem SP. Conrats on a well deserved place in Charlotte's contest.
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Date: 1/12/2024 4:04:00 AM
i love this one - excellent use of language, with a nice sprinkling of rhyme and alliteration; i also like the formatting, it's very current and modernistic - congrats on your win in my contest!
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Date: 1/9/2024 1:58:00 PM
This is a fav of mine now, too! Such diction and power and vulnerability. Love the end.
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Date: 1/8/2024 12:14:00 PM
Your poem is a mesmerizing exploration of the profound significance of eyes and the emotions they convey. It beautifully captures the depth and transformative power of the gaze... Its a masterful celebration of the expressive power of eyes, weaving together vivid imagery, metaphors, and emotions to create a mesmerizing and evocative exploration of human connection and transcendence...
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Date: 1/8/2024 8:54:00 AM
An amazing write. I enjoyed reading this one. I love your pretty picture... Have a great day writing away............
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Date: 1/8/2024 6:01:00 AM
--ethereal eyes whisper to my soul sparkling with glee pristine eyes hypnosis---stupendous azure eyes! aggregations of night elixir spellbind the world with an aura of simmering--splendor of words, my friend. Keep writing your gems, Lasaad.
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Date: 1/8/2024 4:48:00 AM
I agree with you, Sotto. Eyes tell us a great deal...one just has to learn to gently focus on them and read them. Eyes do 'transcend verbal expression;' they captivate and motivate us. I liked the romantic touch of 'her blue eyes.' My favorite line is: as dew at dawn chatoyant eyes embrace you butterfly-like in gestalt.' A unique way to use the word 'gestalt.' Hidden depth to your words and images. You have such extraordinary skill, not matter the form of poetry. I admire that quality in you!
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Date: 1/8/2024 3:46:00 AM
- Wow, Las...this was impressive... with respect and admiration, hugs
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Date: 1/8/2024 1:30:00 AM
Looking at the 'soul gates' and finding cosmic beauty, Well written Sotto
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Date: 1/8/2024 1:10:00 AM
Your poem resonates with melodious but down-to-earth visuals. What a great diction. Besides you are a master of imagery.
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Date: 1/7/2024 8:05:00 PM
What a powerful write this is dr sotto, I believe eyes do speak volumes, and are powerful window to ones soul, can either break shake or make someones day. Your arrangement of lines here is a bit different to your usual but shows how diverse you are in arrangement plus trying different forms and themes of poetry. Really impeccable! I love the ending lines the most, they hit so strong for me and i can resonate especially with “ those eyes are as sibilant as the rising sun—“ FAVE this is
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