Soul Ketchup

mostly when you leave
the sunshine stays, but it’s all different
and the hollowness
and the opression
and the muzziness
and the fecklessness
and the lassitude
and all that other things, even slightly
hit sharply like soul lightnings
and fire tornadoes 
and the beating tomato of my heart
feels like a ketchup trapped in a bottle
but I‘ll always wait until that day
when I can see you again

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 5/28/2017 8:36:00 AM
Can't pass up a PO with ketchup in the title! My second favorite condiment will never be the same again;-) Enjoyed your descriptives ~ john
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William Greco
Date: 5/28/2017 9:04:00 AM
thanks John, glad you like it
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