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paradoxically my forlornness profound aggravation runs high gear can't drown thrash around then toss back the cover dropping knees shout out usher soul yearns for God yearns for closeness yearns for boldness spirit craves God tears welling up in sight freed grips of plight THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived// * Inspired from Poet Brian Strand. Written: February 10, 2022 1st place contest winner A STRAND (1071) Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Date: 2/12/2022 7:46:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I really enjoyed it. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend................
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Date: 2/11/2022 8:27:00 AM
Greatt invention. Best for a win.
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Date: 2/11/2022 5:26:00 AM
Kudos to you Lasaad, for venturing into many poetic forms. Your spirits soar my friend.
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Date: 2/10/2022 11:13:00 PM
The soul will always be craving for God, though the body may not ! Beautifully expressed in a new form, dear friend !
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