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Soul Harmony

paradoxically my forlornness
          profound
aggravation runs  high gear 
          can't drown

thrash around 
then toss back 
          the cover

dropping knees 
          shout out usher
soul yearns for God
          yearns for closeness
          yearns for boldness

spirit craves God
          tears welling up 
          in sight
freed grips of plight



THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived// * Inspired from Poet Brian Strand.

Written: February 10, 2022

1st place contest winner 

A STRAND (1071) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

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Paula Goldsmith February 12, 2022 at 7:46 AM Congratulations on your win. A creative write. I really enjoyed it. Have a great/blessed~~day/weekend................

Victor Buhagiar February 11, 2022 at 8:27 AM Greatt invention. Best for a win.

Vijay Pandit February 11, 2022 at 5:26 AM Kudos to you Lasaad, for venturing into many poetic forms. Your spirits soar my friend.

Valsa George February 10, 2022 at 11:13 PM The soul will always be craving for God, though the body may not ! Beautifully expressed in a new form, dear friend !