Soul Harmony
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paradoxically my forlornness
profound
aggravation runs high gear
can't drown
thrash around
then toss back
the cover
dropping knees
shout out usher
soul yearns for God
yearns for closeness
yearns for boldness
spirit craves God
tears welling up
in sight
freed grips of plight
THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE without grammatical symbols the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and respond thus making the form a two way interplay and often a unique interpretation by the enigma so derived// * Inspired from Poet Brian Strand.
Written: February 10, 2022
1st place contest winner
A STRAND (1071) Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand
Copyright © Sotto Poet | Year Posted 2022
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