Sorry

First, let me say I'm sorry This isn't your fault, it's mine I don't feel for you what you feel for me And I know that seems so unkind But, the passion we used to have I don't feel it anymore The flame that burned inside of us Has dwindled to nothing, and nothing more I'm sorry for you, who came out of the blue I fell in love with a girl, but my love is no longer true.

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Skat A

Date: 6/20/2014 6:05:00 PM

Carson, Congratulations, awesome breaking up poem....... SKAT

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 6/19/2014 8:40:00 AM

Congratulations, Carson, on a well-deserved, big win! Excellent, clever write that I thoroughly enjoyed! Warm regards.

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/19/2014 6:58:00 AM

Congratulations on a fine win in Breaking up contest, Carson

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/19/2014 1:14:00 AM

Carson.. Congratulations, and thank you so much for enjoying, my contest. I enjoyed every poem, on my Breaking up contest. I can sit here, and say I truly enjoyed every entry, even the few that chose not to follow my rules... LOL, Love LINDA