Sorrow's Intrigue

In the midst of my sorrow
I wallow deep in intrigue
My minds eye on hurt and tears
Still of interest

Russell Sivey
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Dietrich Avatar
December 16, 2011 at 10:06 PM
I bet you like this form a lot too! (didn't mean to sound rude about your poem. But if it's true that you are wallowing, then I mean what I said. haha!!)
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December 16, 2011 at 10:04 PM
Stop wallowing then; just move on. I was glad to see this dodoitu tonight. I had done my New Year's poem first as senryu and then as tanka, but then I realized I could do exactly sixteen lines with four dodoitsu, which gives you the exact limit! Dodoitsu is perfect for certain kinds of topics and it's just more fun!
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