Sorrows

You melted my dreams,
Casted it on your expectations,
Slammed it on me,
To mesh with it with determination.
Draining myself for you,
Still heard what you have done?
Before I close my eyes every night,
I wonder,do you ever love?
You mock at my feelings,
That peep through my eyes,
It's of heartache you gave,
But I am tounge tied.
You care of me sometimes,
And it's alleviating,
I forget all my sorrows,
And think you're loving.
But when the daydream shatters,
And I come in light,
All I see,
Love is but a blight.
I cannot utter "I hate you",
I feel neither,
Though you made me hate myself,
Or the world either.
Everyone says,
I should be loving you,
But I donot feel suchlike,
I feel like I am at the darkest roads,
Forlorn,
Deaf and muted,
I cannot even scream or cry.


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Date: 10/5/2023 6:18:00 AM
A very emotive piece. Thanks for your comment on my poem.
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Curie Stark
Date: 11/4/2023 12:40:00 PM
Thanks richard
Date: 9/9/2023 10:59:00 AM
Amazing poetry, glad I came by your poem today, hope to read many more :)
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Curie Stark
Date: 9/10/2023 11:40:00 PM
Thanks
Date: 8/24/2023 9:38:00 AM
Welcome to the soup. I see your serious about poetry and it come as a natural thing. I came to the first on my way to others.
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Curie Stark
Date: 8/25/2023 3:39:00 AM
Glad you liked the situation
Date: 10/15/2021 11:45:00 AM
A very emotive poem, Curie. Welcome to PSoup. May love light your path in life always.
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Curie Stark
Date: 1/7/2022 9:58:00 AM
Thanks
Date: 10/23/2020 11:09:00 PM
We can feel the sorrows you express, Curie. Nicely done, and welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Mark
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Date: 10/24/2020 1:30:00 AM
Thank you
Date: 10/13/2020 7:06:00 AM
You write very well and so deeply... welcome to poetry soup..
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Curie Stark
Date: 10/16/2020 5:02:00 AM
Thank you.....
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