Sorrows

You melted my dreams,
Casted it on your expectations,
Slammed it on me,
To mesh with it with determination.
Draining myself for you,
Still heard what you have done?
Before I close my eyes every night,
I wonder,do you ever love?
You mock at my feelings,
That peep through my eyes,
It's of heartache you gave,
But I am tounge tied.
You care of me sometimes,
And it's alleviating,
I forget all my sorrows,
And think you're loving.
But when the daydream shatters,
And I come in light,
All I see,
Love is but a blight.
I cannot utter "I hate you",
I feel neither,
Though you made me hate myself,
Or the world either.
Everyone says,
I should be loving you,
But I donot feel suchlike,
I feel like I am at the darkest roads,
Forlorn,
Deaf and muted,
I cannot even scream or cry.


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Lamoureux Avatar
October 5, 2023 at 6:18 AM
A very emotive piece. Thanks for your comment on my poem.
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November 4, 2023 at 12:40 PM
Thanks richard
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September 9, 2023 at 10:59 AM
Amazing poetry, glad I came by your poem today, hope to read many more :)
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September 10, 2023 at 11:40 PM
Thanks
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August 24, 2023 at 9:38 AM
Welcome to the soup. I see your serious about poetry and it come as a natural thing. I came to the first on my way to others.
Stark Avatar
August 25, 2023 at 3:39 AM
Glad you liked the situation
Robinson Jr. Avatar
October 15, 2021 at 11:45 AM
A very emotive poem, Curie. Welcome to PSoup. May love light your path in life always.
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January 7, 2022 at 9:58 AM
Thanks
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October 23, 2020 at 11:09 PM
We can feel the sorrows you express, Curie. Nicely done, and welcome to PoetrySoup! ~Mark
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October 24, 2020 at 1:30 AM
Thank you
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October 13, 2020 at 7:06 AM
You write very well and so deeply... welcome to poetry soup..
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October 16, 2020 at 5:02 AM
Thank you.....
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