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Sorrow of Rain

Foolishness rose inside this heart It screamed for the quietude of present And covered its ear at the screeches of piercing past Groveling, undulating . . . the mountains arose And all was in eyesight Senses bled out and the lambs painfully drank This heart was once brazen, haughty and bright Now it patiently waits for the blankets of night It will never be uncovered, unraveled . . . discovered This was the thought of the heart in history But many have come across it Only to pass by in distain For who can bear the noisy sorrow of rain? They pass feeling the anguish throb Touching their hearts for moments Only to be lost in the void named Forgotten Fool . . . fool, how could you believe? This isn’t real—they cannot see But in this place you have so easily found Harder will it be in this heart— To leave To give away It has fallen into selfish feeling And it waits and wallows Screaming still for silence Never to attain Only to gain the sorrow of rain March 14, 2013

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/21/2013 4:11:00 PM
Thank you so very much for visiting me and finding time to comment on my work. You are a wonderful writer, Laura, and this poem speaks no less about how gifted you are at writing such wonderful poems.
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Date: 3/21/2013 1:56:00 PM
I truly respect the apparent ambiguity in this composition Laura which entreats the reader's mind to form it's own meaning for the artwork - a great framework for one to individualize - I have a passion for History, and for me this personifies History's rather sullen dispositon at times, and the consequence of a scholars devotion to discovering the meanings of the Past - J.A.B. %
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Date: 3/21/2013 2:07:00 AM
There you are...Standing alone in the sorrow of the rain.Such volume! Oh my! Nice.... :o) Always,~Dan~
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Date: 3/18/2013 9:10:00 PM
It sounds like a very dark and very secluded person! The descriptions in this were very intense and I'm left wondering what kinda person he was before the shadows overcame him? It's unimaginably sad to think of someone being in a place of endless rain... wonderful work! And btw.... you make my day with all the reading you have done on my poetry list! I am most honored by this... thanks! :D
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Date: 3/18/2013 2:11:00 PM
nice keep them coming
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