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oh sorrow, you moan my name day and night and seek out my anguish, my grief, and misery making me melancholy and mournful . . . and it is because of you I pick up a pen to write woebegone words . . . that drip, drip, drip- then, you leave me until I am called back when you embrace me, so I may suffer again, again- and like a lover lost, I hold you, hold you pressed to my heart . . . ________________________ April 15, 2018 Poetry/Verse/'Sorrow: Like a Lover' Copyright Protected, ID 18-1121-689-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted into Standard Contest 190 sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 3/9/2019 7:52:00 AM
I liked the longing in the words. You made the reader feel the need and the regret. A amazing poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/9/2019 10:16:00 AM
Thank you John
Date: 3/7/2019 3:33:00 PM
Amazing poetry for love. Love can be sweetness and sorrow in the same sentence.
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Date: 3/8/2019 7:33:00 PM
John, thanks for visiting with the amazing !
Date: 3/7/2019 5:58:00 AM
You are on quite the roll today, as usual, but even more beautiful missives, which I did not know was possible.
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Constance La France
Date: 3/8/2019 7:32:00 PM
Caren, I am having a writing day, thanks for the beautiful ~

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