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Sorrow Borrowed From Teardrops

There’s sorrow borrowed from teardrops of rain, I am lost and can’t contain this weeping pain- When memories flood like the coastal shore, I know there is only one thing that can remain, it’s the fact it’s always been you that I adore. My eyes fill with rain- my lover left in vain. When loving became a distant affection, is when I realized we lost our connection- I have but one thing to say to you before you go, I’m sorry for all my pitiful imperfections. I gave up when love became covered in woe. My eyes fill with rain- leaving a crimson stain. Can’t you see my heart can no longer advance without the memory of our passionate romance? I try to move on, but this hand has not yours to embrace, please I beg of you, give me one more chance, as teardrops of rain stream down my miserable face. My eyes fill with rain- filled with anger and disdain. Crystalline tears shed as I remember our vow, we have to find our way back someway, somehow- There is no room for joy when your stuck in obscurity, this dissolving separation I just cannot allow. I’m filled with blame and shame, shielded by insecurity. My eyes fill with rain- my lover left in vain. One in Five - Poetry Contest Sponsor: Joseph May January 23, 2018

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Date: 2/15/2018 10:58:00 PM
All the best and big congrats on your wonderful win in Joseph's contest, Luloo - blessings as always, my friend! :-)
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Date: 2/12/2018 3:08:00 PM
Well penned, Laura. Congrats on your fine win.
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Date: 1/25/2018 2:09:00 PM
Hearts are perhaps the most difficult to figure out and maintain. Great writing! Best of luck in the contest.
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Date: 1/25/2018 11:19:00 AM
Nicely written, Luloo, I can feel the pain and sadness in your words. Best of luck in the contest. John
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Date: 1/23/2018 9:39:00 AM
Very well written poem and I can feel the heartache. Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 1/23/2018 7:00:00 AM
Such a sad write with so many sorrowful words, you wrote a heartbreaking poem Lulloo..
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