Sorrow

Tears. Salty kisses sting my cheeks as I weep. --------------- (C) John C Michaels, May 2017

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Agnes Krampe

Date: 5/10/2017 7:06:00 PM

Well done. You are paring it down to the essence.

John Michaels
Date: 5/12/2017 7:34:00 AM

Thanks, Agnes!! Regards, John.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/9/2017 5:41:00 PM

Oh, I really like this. It captures sorrow so well.

John Michaels
Date: 5/10/2017 2:39:00 AM

Thanks for your comments, Andrea. Pleased you liked it! Regards, John.

Paul Callus

Date: 5/7/2017 3:57:00 PM

You let your sad emotions flow from this expressive lanterne, John. Well done! Regards // paul

John Michaels
Date: 5/7/2017 4:33:00 PM

Thank you very much for your kind comments, Paul! All the best, John.

Lisa Ricci

Date: 5/6/2017 8:34:00 AM

Good Morning John. I love the Lanterne Format. It never gets enough credit. Your theme speaks for itself your words give it life and yes are so sad. You have captured sorrow. Well done completely.

John Michaels
Date: 5/6/2017 8:41:00 AM

Hi Lisa. Thank you as always for your kind and supportive comments. Much appreciated!! Regards, John.