Sorrow

Tears.
Salty
kisses sting
my cheeks as I
weep.

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(C) John C Michaels, May 2017

angstgriefheartbreaki misslanterne

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Agnes Krampe

May 10, 2017 at 7:06 PM

Well done. You are paring it down to the essence.

John Michaels

May 12, 2017 at 7:34 AM

Thanks, Agnes!! Regards, John.

Andrea Dietrich

May 9, 2017 at 5:41 PM

Oh, I really like this. It captures sorrow so well.

John Michaels

May 10, 2017 at 2:39 AM

Thanks for your comments, Andrea. Pleased you liked it! Regards, John.

Paul Callus

May 7, 2017 at 3:57 PM

You let your sad emotions flow from this expressive lanterne, John. Well done! Regards // paul

John Michaels

May 7, 2017 at 4:33 PM

Thank you very much for your kind comments, Paul! All the best, John.

Lisa Ricci

May 6, 2017 at 8:34 AM

Good Morning John. I love the Lanterne Format. It never gets enough credit. Your theme speaks for itself your words give it life and yes are so sad. You have captured sorrow. Well done completely.

John Michaels

May 6, 2017 at 8:41 AM

Hi Lisa. Thank you as always for your kind and supportive comments. Much appreciated!! Regards, John.

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