Sore To My Conclusion

Mesmerizing. Fierce fully aggravating.
Sinfully off this guard
Narrowly beyond tracks
Heart-aching, credit-crunching.
Stomach-turning, memory-converging.
Temperance.
Control. Mind-bugging soul 
Cracks, strokes, tears, burns
The butterflies churn
Nerve-racking. Emotion-bedazzling
Ambience comely.

Done. No more.
Appetite so ended
Thoughts and ways never blended
Sharp. Frail. Obscure.
Gross. Beguiled. Unsure.
Lack-luster, deafening throbs
Shocked!
Spun. Tossed. Tangled. Wrinkled.
Lofty – nay, ever sinking.
Gully-deep, well-emptied
Blanked!
Completely darkened.

Sore. Wrecked. Crowded.
Dead sounds chanting
Coarse noise gallivanting 
Bereaved from ***** trials
Saddened from down-turned madness
Torn.
Debunked, dislodged from gaiety 
Misconstrued from onset.
Shallow. Fallen. Hopeless.
Sure,
For the very last of time.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Agustin Avatar
November 20, 2024 at 9:52 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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March 6, 2016 at 8:07 PM
Tamara, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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January 8, 2016 at 8:45 PM
TAMARA, well done on your poem, enjoyed reading today. *SKAT
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December 14, 2010 at 11:11 PM
Thanks alot Linda-Marie. I really do appreciate and i'm looking forward to having a swell time!
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December 14, 2010 at 8:07 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing... check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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