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Sore To My Conclusion

Mesmerizing. Fierce fully aggravating. Sinfully off this guard Narrowly beyond tracks Heart-aching, credit-crunching. Stomach-turning, memory-converging. Temperance. Control. Mind-bugging soul Cracks, strokes, tears, burns The butterflies churn Nerve-racking. Emotion-bedazzling Ambience comely. Done. No more. Appetite so ended Thoughts and ways never blended Sharp. Frail. Obscure. Gross. Beguiled. Unsure. Lack-luster, deafening throbs Shocked! Spun. Tossed. Tangled. Wrinkled. Lofty – nay, ever sinking. Gully-deep, well-emptied Blanked! Completely darkened. Sore. Wrecked. Crowded. Dead sounds chanting Coarse noise gallivanting Bereaved from ***** trials Saddened from down-turned madness Torn. Debunked, dislodged from gaiety Misconstrued from onset. Shallow. Fallen. Hopeless. Sure, For the very last of time.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 3/6/2016 8:07:00 PM
Tamara, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing, hope to see a new one from you again. LOVE LINDA
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Date: 1/8/2016 8:45:00 PM
TAMARA, well done on your poem, enjoyed reading today. *SKAT
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Date: 12/14/2010 11:11:00 PM
Thanks alot Linda-Marie. I really do appreciate and i'm looking forward to having a swell time!
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Date: 12/14/2010 8:07:00 PM
Welcome to Poetry Soup.. so enjoyed reading your creative write tonight.. hope your time on the Soup will be fun and filled with sharing... check out the contests too.. good luck with luv..
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