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Sore Loser

Can we make it in this world without athletic talent Can we make it in this world with sensitivity Can we make it in this world with a hot head Can we make it in this world without a nice girl Can we make it in this world with enemies Can we make it in this world with lost friends Can we make it in this world with pessimism Can we make it in this world without enthusiasm Can we make it in this world with scars of emotion Can we make it in this world with poetic ambitions I think we can I think I can Sore loser they call me But I wanna prove them wrong I wrote this poem because one of my classmates called me a sore loser (hence the title) and the one thing I wanted to do is prove him wrong (Written on 10.12.10)

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Date: 12/22/2011 9:35:00 PM
AWESOME one. Indeed, quite powerful, these words from your heart. Always, Laura
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Date: 12/11/2010 5:39:00 AM
Very raging and powerful thoughts you have pen to give answer to your classmate, Tyrone
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Date: 12/11/2010 4:13:00 AM
You have proved it wrong,Tyron.I can see your mind.
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