Sophistication

I saw it
Kerouacin
Sitting on sophistication
If only your life could be so
I went pee 7 times tonight
You know you pick your butt 
when no one else is around
I wish you were here
Noises: you must check out
I don't want to be left behind
I didn't know i could scare 
myself like that.
This commotion i hear,
  What is it you want me to 
know?
Give me something warm like 
the shirt off your back!
It would really help in a time 
like this.
TO SWOOSH AS WAVES
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Brown Avatar
June 19, 2012 at 5:57 AM
A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you David. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/19/2012
Schaller Avatar
June 18, 2012 at 11:23 PM
I was also talking about the noise to give me his shirt because it was uncomfortable... La la la la I love it
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June 18, 2012 at 11:22 PM
It's called poetry and I can write whatever I want haha
Poopenheimer Avatar
June 17, 2012 at 10:25 PM
or give something warm like the pee u did 7 times holy crap the only good parts is when you said butt and pee!
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