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Sophistication

I saw it Kerouacin Sitting on sophistication If only your life could be so I went pee 7 times tonight You know you pick your butt when no one else is around I wish you were here Noises: you must check out I don't want to be left behind I didn't know i could scare myself like that. This commotion i hear, What is it you want me to know? Give me something warm like the shirt off your back! It would really help in a time like this. TO SWOOSH AS WAVES

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Date: 6/19/2012 5:57:00 AM
A belated but warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you David. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol 06/19/2012
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Date: 6/18/2012 11:23:00 PM
I was also talking about the noise to give me his shirt because it was uncomfortable... La la la la I love it
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Date: 6/18/2012 11:22:00 PM
It's called poetry and I can write whatever I want haha
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Date: 6/17/2012 10:25:00 PM
or give something warm like the pee u did 7 times holy crap the only good parts is when you said butt and pee!
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