Sophistication

They call themselves sophisticated,
score that special hit, 
drive a brand new 'Beemer'
and annoy us with their wit.

E-mails, cell phones, always selling,
always out to merchandize,
little do they know that 
we can see through their disguise.

Sophistication isn't clever,
cravin' money, kissin' ass,
climbin' up the corporate ladder
no, I think I'll take a pass,

for there's another kind of lovin',
playin' frisbee in the park,
fixin' dinner, doin' dishes,
stolen kisses in the dark.

The gentle of a special woman,
tender moments to recall,
making love and making memories, 
joy and laughter through it all.

You can keep your slick devices,
lookin' sharp no matter what,
to me sophistication's simple,
I'm content with what I've got.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Wallace Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 8:07 PM
i like the theme of this poem a lot.I completely agree with you.
Anish Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 5:13 PM
You sound like a bit of a "Luddite". But that is O.K. - you make a convincing case. Yours Matthew Anish
Mac Donald Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 6:36 AM
Oh my, "sophistication" sounds complicted, like running a course of steeplechase. Their horses would need to be strong, and sure footed? But you write of a "gentle" mare.:) You know I'm rambling..bad me! I love this piece..no mess..no fuss..matter of fact. There is much to be praised and appreciated, in simplicity. "Sophistication" is often left preening at the gate. God bless you and yours!! Love and hugs..Mikki
Shango Avatar
April 13, 2009 at 4:43 AM
You wrote me a favorite. Love always.
Shahwan Avatar
April 12, 2009 at 7:37 PM
Beautiful poem.
Moreno Avatar
April 12, 2009 at 3:20 AM
Happy Easter Keith, loved the last three stanzas...Raul
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