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Sophistication

They call themselves sophisticated, score that special hit, drive a brand new 'Beemer' and annoy us with their wit. E-mails, cell phones, always selling, always out to merchandize, little do they know that we can see through their disguise. Sophistication isn't clever, cravin' money, kissin' ass, climbin' up the corporate ladder no, I think I'll take a pass, for there's another kind of lovin', playin' frisbee in the park, fixin' dinner, doin' dishes, stolen kisses in the dark. The gentle of a special woman, tender moments to recall, making love and making memories, joy and laughter through it all. You can keep your slick devices, lookin' sharp no matter what, to me sophistication's simple, I'm content with what I've got.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/13/2009 8:07:00 PM
i like the theme of this poem a lot.I completely agree with you.
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Date: 4/13/2009 5:13:00 PM
You sound like a bit of a "Luddite". But that is O.K. - you make a convincing case. Yours Matthew Anish
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Date: 4/13/2009 6:36:00 AM
Oh my, "sophistication" sounds complicted, like running a course of steeplechase. Their horses would need to be strong, and sure footed? But you write of a "gentle" mare.:) You know I'm rambling..bad me! I love this piece..no mess..no fuss..matter of fact. There is much to be praised and appreciated, in simplicity. "Sophistication" is often left preening at the gate. God bless you and yours!! Love and hugs..Mikki
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Date: 4/13/2009 4:43:00 AM
You wrote me a favorite. Love always.
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Date: 4/12/2009 7:37:00 PM
Beautiful poem.
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Date: 4/12/2009 3:20:00 AM
Happy Easter Keith, loved the last three stanzas...Raul
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