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Sophisticated Pied Piper

Once, kids’ eyes lit up while outdoors creating manual, playful scenes Stories performed by Puppeteers were great fun for young and old Today, they all seem mesmerized; eyes affixed on video screens With parents juggling hectic hours, warmth is vaporized from abode Trending now is video games; spawns of machines have taken over Hearts and minds made as cold as steel, make you wonder what lies ahead I doubt the creators are satisfied to have found a four leaf clover As in the case of Frankenstein, don't be surprised if they try to raise the dead! Let's face it, we live in a world of greed! Don’t expect a ban on video games After all, they say, each one comes labeled with a “suggested” rating! So, it’s up to parents to guide; make time to preview same As this sophisticated pied piper, for a while, in our homes, will be staying! ~*~ For Yasmin's "Video Games Contest"

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Date: 2/2/2013 9:38:00 AM
I love this poem excellent excellent excellent. I'm going to keep coming back to read your poetry because everyone should and I don't want to be left out. I'm still litsening poet.
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Date: 1/21/2013 3:30:00 PM
Great poem. I think that it's all about money. Thanks for sharing. Lucilla
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Date: 1/20/2013 9:52:00 AM
Annalise, :-) CONGRATULATIONS on a poem well done. Nice exposure in Yasmin's "Video Games Played " extravaganza... take care ~PD
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Date: 1/19/2013 3:02:00 PM
Very impressive..Great write friend..Congrats on your superb win.....
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Date: 1/19/2013 12:15:00 PM
Congrats on your win!
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Date: 1/18/2013 10:24:00 PM
You did an incredible job with this challenge. I am impressed, Annalise! Congrats here, and wow, so nice to see your avatar picture!
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:54:00 AM
"Pied Piper" inference/analogy is golden. Let's remember how that turned out for parents. We better watch our children! RAY
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:13:00 AM
Sad but very true! Congrad's on your thoughtful write winning. Light & Love
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Date: 1/18/2013 7:11:00 AM
Well said, I like the parallel you made with the pied piper. Well Donne. Congratulations.
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Date: 1/18/2013 6:01:00 AM
congrats on a fine win Annalise
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Date: 1/18/2013 3:26:00 AM
Congratulations Annalise, a well deserved win here. xx
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Date: 1/16/2013 9:07:00 PM
Hello Annalise, my eyes are 50% fixed on them games.. LOL... and yes they have taken over... it makes zombies out of us... and when buy games for my son's i go by the ratings on the back...he he he..it makes it easier to say no... bad bad me!! your poem is good...good luck in the contest..pd
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Date: 1/15/2013 10:31:00 AM
I agree with you Annalise - Parents must be awake !!!!!- watch what your kids are doing on games and the internet !!!!!! - Good poem, luck in contest ! - Have a nice afternoon. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Audrey Haick
Date: 1/15/2013 10:10:00 PM
Thank you, Anne Lise.. As you know being a parent is no easy task. We're constantly balancing work and kids and these days we have, or our children have to learn to maintain that balance. You have a nice afternoon too!
Date: 1/15/2013 10:19:00 AM
powerful emotional poem of the way it is today,, and you are so right...like this
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Audrey Haick
Date: 1/15/2013 10:06:00 PM
Thanks much, Harry!

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