Soothing Summer

A summer breeze revives the mind as worldly cares are left behind
And gentle waves of lapping seas coax weary bodies to unwind.

29.09.21

Bite Size Poem no.37 Poetry Contest
Sponsor -Line Gauthier
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Gauthier Avatar
November 12, 2022 at 12:43 PM
Beautiful, Wendy ~
La France Avatar
March 2, 2022 at 7:44 AM
Wendy, a lovely couplet and congratulations on your top win in Line's contest ~Constance
Goff Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 6:45 PM
Such artful ambrosia, Wendy! I added to your sweet comment on my entry, describing the poem whence my couplet originated, & also added a tribute ending to my couplet, James
La France Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 2:02 PM
Wendy, congratulations on your win in Milt's Rhyming Couplet Contest, a lovely soothing couplet ~ love and serenity _Constance
Watson Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 2:09 PM
I'm glad the 'sea air' revived your sprits,Constance!Thank you.
Allison Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 12:02 PM
Super imagery and love the alliteration in the title, many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Watson Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 1:47 PM
Thank you for your constant encouragement,Jan.
Goff Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 9:58 AM
Congrats Wendy! this fluid couplet soothes the mind of the reader, thank you!
Watson Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 1:45 PM
That's so nice to hear, James. It was taken from my first attempt at a rispetto form.
Kauffman Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 9:43 AM
Wendy, congratulations for your win. So nice to see you on the winners list. Your word picture lets us all unwind to the sound of the waves on the seashore. Hope you are well!
Watson Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 1:45 PM
That's kind Sam. Yes I've a lot to be thankful for healthwise. I'm glad I 'helped you to relax!'
Hankins Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 9:26 AM
Your imagery is breath-taking, Wendy. And you know how I love the sea! Congratulations on your placement in my contest. You are soooo deserving.
Watson Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 1:43 PM
I'm honoured,Milton. The two lines are lifted from one of my early efforts at poetry writing.
Leffanta Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 11:45 AM
nice!
Watson Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 1:42 PM
Thanks for the appreciation,Rico.
Cunningham Avatar
September 29, 2021 at 5:19 AM
Love the imagery Wendy and nothing beats the soothing sounds of the waves. Hope you're well. Tom
Watson Avatar
October 6, 2021 at 1:41 PM
Why thank you,Tom. I have hardly written anything recently but this was lifted from my poem 'Linger awhile sweet summer'- an early effort of mine.
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