Soothing Moonbeams

soothing moonbeams ….
shadowed silhouette cast
shape of child’s cradle 

Mar 4 2011 For Chris’ alliterative haiku
placed first
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Brown Avatar
March 7, 2011 at 11:34 AM
Congratulations on your winning poem in Chris's contest Charles. Love, Carol
Freeman Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 6:33 PM
Congratulations Charles on a well deserved first place. Agape, Moses
Song Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 3:54 PM
This would lull any newborn to sleep. Imagery is so relaxing! Awesome job and worthy of its honor! Blessings! Gwendolen
Devonshire Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 3:28 PM
Big congrats on your first-place win, Charles. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 1:12 PM
Congratulations on the first place win in the contest of Chris, Charles
Richards Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 8:02 AM
So softly sweet and makes me smile!! Congratulations, Charles!
Guzzi Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 7:48 AM
a tender write, peaceful, I thought of being Wendy in the dark watching over Peter's band...Congrad's on your BIG WIN, you're the main ku man! Light & Love
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 6:38 AM
Congrats Charlotte on your first place win in the Alliteration Haiku contest with this stunning selection luv.. enjoy your top spot..
Sweetheart Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 6:37 AM
Congrats Charles on your first place win in the Alliteration Haiku contest with this stunning selection luv.. enjoy your top spot with luv..
Poet Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 5:26 AM
Wonderful write!Congrats Charles on your 1st place win---kashinath
Horsman Avatar
March 6, 2011 at 1:35 AM
Love This, Charles, enjoyed, congrats. Harry
Dietrich Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 10:44 PM
REminds me of rock a bye baby, out in the dark! But the soothing kind not with the poor baby falling! VERY nice, CHarles. Congratulations. I sure hope you are fine. I don't think I have heard from you in a long while!
K. Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 10:03 PM
This creates such a vivid image in my mind, Charles, enjoyed this one very much-- way to go on your first place win :) Super congrats!
Johnson Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 7:23 PM
Very nice LCharles. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Dufresne Avatar
March 5, 2011 at 6:54 PM
Congratulations to you Charles
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