Soothing Coolness

As the tide flows in

           caressing the burning sand 

                a soothing coolness

                      resounds around our footprints

                            left behind at waters edge
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May 20, 2013 at 1:11 PM
image is very vivid, beautiful poetry form. feel like running to the beach at this very second. Beautiful Love manel
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