Soonn Deux

On the sands of time

How will his feet print on the sands of time?
The query he is so bothered to ask
Emirates, ere hit and run dashes his rhyme
And creates deep holes of vast pending task.

Will those little lights yet glow when he’s gone?
Or will they die off when he’s in that hole?
This, he meditates in his deepest lone,
Scribbles verse, should unexpected grips whole.

Placer orb was where he conceived this tongue;
Whence his momentary opt to torch the ground
Ere it will be too late to dong a gong-
Then the planet will guest still air of sound.

For the world abrupt visitors, he scribes
This anon writ, ere God sends His un-bribes.

©A.O, 4/3/2014.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014



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Date: 3/20/2014 5:19:00 AM
Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win,
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Date: 3/20/2014 4:35:00 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Abdulhafeez ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 3/20/2014 1:07:00 AM
Abdulhafeez, Congrats, awesome win! ~SKAT~
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Date: 3/19/2014 11:02:00 PM
Abdulhafeez, Impressive like the themes. Congratulations on your win. :) Love ~LINDA
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Date: 3/4/2014 1:08:00 PM
A classic one Oyewole,I'm sincerely proud of this;kudos my brother.
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Abdulhafeez Oyewole
Date: 3/4/2014 1:14:00 PM
Proud of yours too. Thanks Kayode.
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