Soon

“Soon”, I said, knowing probably never;
“Maybe later, after it’s way better weather”.

“Stop bugging me - I said, soon,” are the words I repeated,
“After you give me the five minutes of peace that I’ve needed!”

Not one minute passes and they’re asking again,
“Ask one more time and it’s never, my friend!”

I should never have mentioned the possibility,
That all of the kids could someday go there with me.

“I don’t know how soon soon is – it might be today;
It could be in a month or a good year away.”

“But one thing is sure, it will never arrive,
If you keep on pestering - on that, please rely.”

“So think of something else that all of you can do
Instead of asking that stupid question every minute or two.”

“As soon as soon finally gets here I’ll let you all know
And no sooner than that will be the day that we go.”

“So that word you keep asking, which I will not repeat,
Won’t get soon here sooner – so the ask, please delete.”

They walked away sad, with a slink and a mope,
But without asking again – for an entire day, I can hope.

And as soon as they give up on it ever arriving -
Soon will arrive and there we’ll be driving.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Guzzi Avatar
June 12, 2011 at 1:22 PM
are we there yet! Haven't all parents been through this LOL congrad's on your win. Light & Love
Antwan Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 6:53 PM
I like this "time is of the essence" piece. Congrats on your win!
Phookan Avatar
May 5, 2011 at 6:54 AM
A very fine write on this theme "when". Congrats Joe on your super win in this contest..gautami
Falotico Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 2:04 PM
Congrats Joe on 1st place!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Minardi Avatar
May 4, 2011 at 8:10 AM
I like this poem. Did you win? Congratulation :)
Buckeridge Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 10:56 AM
Congratulations on your win
Kendrick Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 10:35 AM
Congratulations on your win with this creative work..Sara
Taylor Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 8:27 AM
Congrats on your 1st Place win, Joe. Very clever, well written piece. Don't know "when" (oops!) I've seen a more deserving win. Kudos. Nice going. Ralph
Konos Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 7:36 AM
Congratulations....KQQL
Sweetheart Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 4:22 AM
Congrats Joe on your fantastic first place in Paula's contest .. amazing lines relating to 'when'..hope all is much better for u now my friend... always in my thoughts and prayers luv.
Brown Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 3:53 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win Joe in Paula's "When" contest. Love, Carol
Mantle Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 12:50 AM
A great piece. Many congrats on your well deserved win. Best wishes Em :)
Onclaud Avatar
May 3, 2011 at 12:01 AM
super toppers, joe.. congrats on the big win; an unorthodox way of expressing the unsayable..:) huggs!
K. Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 11:10 PM
Super congrats on your first place win, Joe! You definitely skirted around this question so well, really enjoyed reading this! I hope you will be more active here soon :)
Dietrich Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 9:40 PM
Congratulations on a great win, Joe! Good idea you used for the contest. LUv, Andrea
Okwudili Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 8:37 PM
Beautiful poem, Joe. Enjoy your first place win.
Richards Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 8:26 PM
How perfectly you scooted around the word "when!" Excellent win, Joe....welcome back to the winners circle...we've missed you!!! :)
Mannan Avatar
May 2, 2011 at 8:21 PM
You have taken this contest theme to great heights. Many warm congrats for this win.
Coulstock Avatar
May 1, 2011 at 10:07 AM
Hi Joe-I think this is great fun and a bit reminiscent of that other phrase tomorrow never comes!Found it witty and clever.A favourite funny for me.Thank you for the laugh.Love June(sylvia)
Dietrich Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 4:52 PM
Nice tongue in cheek, Joe. I enjoyed this cute poem. Right now we have the grandkids living with us and our daugher and her hubby. I simply do not understand why they must be running for an hour overhead me like elephants in our house. It really worries me becuase my hubbie has a short temper and he is napping.haha. How I hope they get a house!!
White Avatar
April 30, 2011 at 3:02 AM
It is a true tomorrow tale. Brings back some funny memories.
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