Soon

He walks by 
My legs weak
My mouths numb
When I try to speak


He so fine beautiful
Like the risen sun
I beg my heart
To let me go near him

I don’t though
My fear to strong
I’ve never felt this way
Or at least this strong about someone before

He drives my nerves
On a chase for speed
My heart pumps with every breath 
That he breathes
I fancy into thinking that he could with me
I dream about the nights we would spend walking together
And hand in hand
Walking in the sand

One day he will know how strong I feel about him
How each day I plead to my god to let me talk to him
When will I be with him
And him with me

Soon 
And then with each step that I take the roses will bloom 
As beautiful as him and each one will complement him
Soon

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 2/9/2010 4:29:00 PM
Great love write in this one. Keep the romantic writes flowing. Sara
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Date: 2/6/2010 4:48:00 PM
Welcome to the Poetry Soup Family of poets.. please continue to share your creative writes with us all ... as this delight tonight.. enjoyed reading.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of Poetry Soup..
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