Sonora: the Desert

Harsh sunlight beats upon the thirsty land
And glares upon the limestone cliffs and sand,
   While waves of heat rise shimmering, above
The parched loam where the great saguaros stand.

And perched up high among the spines thereof	
There broods in camouflage a mother dove,
   Whose eggs lie hidden by her breast, her nest	
A knitted niche of neatly-knotted love.   

Along the desiccated ground, impressed
By tiny running feet, crisscrossing lest
   A predator should see, a rodent’s track
Evinces its unending hungry quest.

Concealed among the stones of brown and black,
Its body hidden stretched along a crack
   And waiting, watching for unwary prey,
There lurks a waiting, patient diamondback.

Ephedra, sage and creosote all stray
Along the rims of sere arroyos.  They
   Succeed in thriving: an exquisite feat
Amid the barren soil and rock-hard clay.

And seemingly unfazed by searing heat,
Up where the mescal trees and heaven meet,
   Cicadas make the wasteland throb with sound,
Their many-years’ interment now complete.

The desert’s lush abundance will abound
With form and color rarely elsewhere found --
   Throughout one sees the working of that hand
Whose word and wisdom nature will expound.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017



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Date: 4/21/2019 4:05:00 PM
I missed this the first time it placed but wow, this is very clever writing with great meter as well. Congrats on your overall performance in the marathon. your poem is high class!
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Date: 4/20/2019 11:17:00 PM
Back with more congrats on your win, JP.
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J P Marmaro
Date: 8/29/2019 12:36:00 PM
Hi again, Line! And thank you so much-- your generous encouragement is so very much appreciated!
Date: 4/20/2019 5:23:00 PM
J. P., after 122 days, 27 contests, and 945 submitted poems, my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest has finally come to its end. Congratulations on placing 27th overall in the marathon! There is no provision to denote this in the Standard Contest other than Honorable Mention. Your participation in my contests is much appreciated. ~Mark
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Date: 8/29/2019 12:38:00 PM
Hi Mark! So sorry for not having read your very considerate comments until now... and I wanted to thank you sincerely for your encouragement... and as the old saw aptly puts it, late is indeed better than never.
Date: 2/25/2019 7:48:00 PM
A very lovely poem, JP, full of imagery that brings your desert to life! Congratulations on your well-deserved podium win. Sandra
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Date: 2/25/2019 9:01:00 PM
Thanks so much, Sandra!
Date: 2/25/2019 4:04:00 PM
Beautiful, JP. Congrats on your podium finish.
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Date: 2/25/2019 9:03:00 PM
As ever Line, your kindness and encouragement are very greatly appreciated!
Date: 2/24/2019 2:05:00 PM
J P, your imagery and choice of words is brilliant! And the last stanza gives credit where credit is due. Now I want to go there, and I don't like getting hot. But it's a dry heat, yeah? :) Congratulations on your second-place win on Mile 20 of my 2019 Poetry Marathon Contest! Thank you so much for supporting my contests. By continuing to place in the contests you are accumulating points toward the final. ~Mark
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Date: 2/25/2019 9:02:00 PM
Mark, I so appreciate your kind remarks!
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