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Sonny Son

Title: Sonny Son

The school bell rang
Kids came pouring out
I couldn’t see my son
He wasn’t there
Nor was he about
He was up in the sky
So high & so free
Yet to be born
But has other places to be
Had the key to the clouds
He should be here on earth with me
So many sights to see
Ground to roam
Only in my dreams i cuddle him
When it should be at home
You & your sister
Could have had all sorts of fun
Im sorry son
Im sorry son
This pain weighs a tonne
Im sorry son, so sorry son
You now are the sun

Copyright © | Year Posted 2023




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Date: 1/9/2023 6:10:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts on "sonny son" through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." God bless you!
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Date: 1/7/2023 2:23:00 PM
it hurts doesn't it..such poignant honesty in your lines..
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Liam Martin
Date: 1/9/2023 3:16:00 AM
Very much so. Thank you :)

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