Sonnet To the Pupil of My School

Hey I wrote a sonnet. The subject is the agony of leaving behind friends after tenth grade,cause i am leaving tenth grade this year.Its my first sonnet,tell me how is it Rate it out of ten Few months, till we become unknown strangers Like a book is unknown to a hoodlum Memories raise their hand like front benchers Tears in my eyes should come Bouncing from department to department Traveler of a new path like a water droplet Can’t sail much longer, old river ends Some notes of love, some of hate Still for something good something is bad We will make new friends for sure Leaving behind the best time we have had For a life, a boring braggadocio You may meet each other in your sphere Remind you, Kanji won’t be there