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Sonnet From Your Hairpin

The pen I write with one day you gave me The words I use would not perhaps have come Had you not given me your misty sea That flooded my rooms with splashes handsome The time I come across every morning The birds from hills and woods inviting me Are whispers I have saved from your hairpin Making me look at you in reddened glee True you are no more in my hands and lips And I get you when my breath is lonely When sea is calm and in rest are tulips In the purple whispers of time only The river though has got robbed of its game The restless neurones still now dance like flame ______________________________________________ 15/9/2016

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Date: 9/24/2016 2:54:00 PM
Probir, beautiful poem :) congratulations on your win! Hugs Eve
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/25/2016 4:30:00 AM
Thank you very much, Eve ...
Date: 9/24/2016 2:44:00 PM
lovely sonnet Probir...congratulations on your placement :)-luloo
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/25/2016 4:31:00 AM
Thank you ...
Date: 9/21/2016 8:11:00 AM
Interesting sonnet, interesting combination of words
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/22/2016 12:19:00 AM
Thank you ... You may like to read my poem posted today, the little pieces ....
Date: 9/15/2016 9:26:00 PM
Through the translation the wonder of your words shine bright Prob if. This is a stunning piece! 7 ; )
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/15/2016 11:32:00 PM
Thank you ... But what you mean by 'translation' is grey .... None of my English poem is translation ... Can you kindly soup mail me to elaborate on this point ...
Date: 9/15/2016 4:22:00 PM
lovely artword that touches me so, probir... what a beauty..huggs
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/15/2016 7:47:00 PM
Thank you nette ...
Date: 9/15/2016 2:39:00 PM
What a moving , yet talented of words and style that speaks to me as I read,that has me thinking , Not many can get me moved like this . keep up the beautiful work . I touched :) Poetic Judy Emery
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/15/2016 7:46:00 PM
I am pleased ... thank you ...
Date: 9/15/2016 6:09:00 AM
very well written sir.....i can imagine the words u write...very beautiful
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Probir Gupta
Date: 9/15/2016 7:43:00 PM
Thank you Manu ...

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