Anu Nayak Poet Free verse

Sonnet Erratic- For Contest

Sonnet Erratic- for contest

 When i saw a peacock i asked for a  plume
When the plume it gave i laid  it on the floor
When the floor was watered the green grass grew
When grass i fed to cattle milk they gave
When i drank milk i grew tall and strong
Now that i am tall  ladder is of no use
Ladder I sold in seconds sale in my town
Got a few bucks, i bribed the moon
As the moon came early, night spread soon
As night came, my time to sleep came soon
I am under the blanket, trying best to sleep
I now realised its impossible to buy sleep!
Till my actual sleep time came, I had to wait..
Oh my poetry friends read aloud and laugh
Let colleagues peep to see what happened..
If u are at home thanks for reading my sonnet!!!!
Fourteen lines u count it have i not kept the rule??
Sorry if u really counted there are few lines more !
Iambic pentameter has taken break to watch  a newly released movie and have pop- corn !
At home or office, have coffee with chocolate cream
After reading this poem you will need for sure!
Best thing i suggest is stop reading at this point
And get back to your work!!!!
To err is human, to forgive is divine
I tried to make u laugh... If i failed to do it.....
I repeat again...to err is human to forgive is divine

for contest :dont fight it...just write it!
Sponsored by:John lawless
by: Anulaxmi Nayak
on: 14th August 2015

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Skat A August 17, 2015 at 3:34 PM Anulaxmi Nayak,, Congratulations on the DON'T FIGHT IT.....WRITE IT!! contest... SKAT Anu Nayak August 23, 2015 at 10:45 AM Dear Skat thank you so very much dear:-) love, Anu:-)

Abdul Malik Mandani August 16, 2015 at 12:01 PM Yeah, it did make me laugh--now, does it cost anything to me? Anu Nayak August 16, 2015 at 12:14 PM Dear Abdul, laughter will surely cost nothing but you are ensured of a healthy and happy soul! Stay happy ...stay cool:-) I wrote this poem to make the readers laugh and my purpose is served!!! Mistakes were allowed in the contest..right?? Well thank you for reding my poem.......love, Anu:-)

Richard Lamoureux August 14, 2015 at 9:59 AM I checked out the contest and gave it a go myself. Good luck in the contest. Anu Nayak August 14, 2015 at 10:03 AM Hey Richard, thats really nice:-) good luck to you too! Eager to read your write!!!

Richard Lamoureux August 14, 2015 at 9:15 AM I like how this bounced me about! Anu Nayak August 14, 2015 at 9:46 AM Dear Richard, thank you for stopping to read my poem and comment....:-) I just wrote it keeping the contest in mind ...mistakes are welcome in this contest! interesting! So thought to write..hope you liked ! Thanks again love, Anu:-)