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Sonnet 2

As water trickles from the aqua sky, I silently ponder over my life… And how much I care, oh can’t you see why? Your bright smile, like the sun helps me through strife. Before now, I never knew who I was, but you helped show me the world’s vivid glow. You are my best friend, brave, funny, and just. With you will I feel the bitter, cold snow? I know that together we’ll move mountains, Our fates like a vine have become entwined. Our pleasure spreads like water in fountains, Moving forward, we'll never press rewind. Holding hands as we keep moving along, You’re the drum behind the beat of my song.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 6/28/2011 6:08:00 PM
Beautiful sonnet with perfect rhyming scheme, with passionate flow of feelings, Beth
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Date: 6/28/2011 5:18:00 PM
Excellent! Nice vivid imagery and had good emotion behind it.
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