Sonnet 1 - Sea Trout

Fast river on my thighs, an act of god.
The soft silvery arc of the sun caught line,
the swish and the wish of the long fly rod,
the singing of the line  and the reels whine 
and whipping back, line stripped off and out.
Line tightening strike! Straight as an arrow
from the bow of the rod to the Sea Trout
The fisher fights footing in the shallows.
And yet,  as he struggles to win the match
the fish fights for life. Where does my heart lie?
Splash, sudden slack. Freedom!  No more the catch.
Coffee cool in my tight right hand, I sigh.
And an untouched sandwich in my left hand 
with fresh cucumber and salmon, canned.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Ruff Avatar
April 15, 2014 at 6:15 AM
Paddi, I don't think I asked you. I would like to include your poem in my text book along with the other sonnets.
Mehta Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 9:07 PM
Nicely penned sonnet and congrats on the win,
Kamoonpuri Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 11:41 AM
Woah interesting! Fishing while munching salmon sanwiches. Nice fishing trip imagery depicted. Hugggs.
Mehta Avatar
January 7, 2014 at 4:15 AM
Enjoye3d the write on fishing on the river, Paddi
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