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Sonnet 1

Just as life moves along, We empty our selves as a bucket with a hole. Moving forever onward, Until me reach an emptiness, One that cannot be known by those who are full. The love of another, Just as the fluid in a bucket, Fills us with purpose. Without ones purpose what does one have, But an empty shell moving every onward to a grim end. Let oneself find themselves a friend who like a patch will cover you, Allowing you to fill once more and continue ever onwards. A friend can help you persevere, A trustworthy companion wouldn't forsake a friend.

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Date: 10/29/2020 11:41:00 AM
I would like to see your poem go on in my contest but it is not a correct curtal sonnet. I have written the instructions on my contest page for you to follow. With a few adjustments this one will be fine. Looking forward to seeing the edited version. Sara
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