Sonnet 18 and a Half

Shall I compare thee to a piece of clay?
Thou crack and crumble in light of the sun.
Thy beauty’s all but washed and burned away
All of my love for thee has been undone.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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February 7, 2016 at 11:02 PM
BILLY, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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March 7, 2012 at 5:51 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Billy. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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