Sonnet

there is a sun moving you out from the darkness of a pillow a dream ends and slowly you open your heavy eyes and meet eyes exactly alike gazing back, awakened with love; there cannot be any noise but the other world going on outside the curtains enclose a soft light, what time it is unknown, and sunny it is because you turned your sleepy head, opened your eyes, and met mine; with a kiss breaks our dawn.

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Beata Agustin

Date: 5/19/2025 7:10:00 AM

Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.