Punnia Viswan Bhatia Poet Free verse

Songs of Power : Let It Be

In times of despair
I hear your voice in the air
“it’s taken care of
You just need to give a complete surrender”

I see you walking me, now and then
But in times of frustration
I know I am carried
Safe inside the cocoon of your arms
Close to your chest
Warm and protected
Kept and consoled
I just need to listen to the Silence
The voice of Silence
The whisper of Silence
Saying, “I am yours, You are mine,
Have faith, let it be…”

-9/11/2015-

contest: Songs of Power
sponsor: Silent One
3rd place winner

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Liam Mcdaid December 28, 2015 at 8:56 PM a breathless piece i say powerful pen Punnia Viswan Bhatia December 29, 2015 at 5:35 AM you are so generous, i say :)) valuing your time, energy and patience you took in my poems :)) highly appreciated :)) the credits for this poem goes to Silent One as he inspired to write this :)) Love and peace...stay strong..

Debbie Duncan November 22, 2015 at 12:25 AM Love the way you wrote :) Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 22, 2015 at 12:33 AM thank you Debbie for this lovely comment :) Love and hugs..

Skat A November 21, 2015 at 11:01 PM One of the best in this contest Remnants, Congratulations. **SKAT** Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 21, 2015 at 11:07 PM Thank you SKAT :)) love and peace

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores November 21, 2015 at 7:04 PM Congratulations Remnant Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 21, 2015 at 8:34 PM hey, thank you Nayda :) Take care

Sandra Haight November 21, 2015 at 2:00 PM Congratulations on your win, Remnants! Nice interpretation of the song. Sandra Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 21, 2015 at 8:34 PM thank you Sandra :) God bless

Robert Lindley November 21, 2015 at 10:14 AM Congrats on your win!! A7 Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 21, 2015 at 11:10 AM WOW..thank you Robert for your time, comment and 7 :) Take care

Jan Allison November 21, 2015 at 8:03 AM love your interpretation of the lyrics - congrats:-) hugs jan xx Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 21, 2015 at 9:58 AM thank you Jan :) love and hugs :*

Anne-Lise Andresen November 11, 2015 at 3:56 AM - I enjoy this, beautifully (7) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 11, 2015 at 4:08 AM thank you Anne :) love and peace :* -punnia-

Elis Artis November 10, 2015 at 7:08 PM This is a winner in my book! I love the way you approached it:) Nice choice of song, everything's perfect +7 Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 10, 2015 at 8:44 PM WOW.... I am so happy that you liked this and for the encouraging words...Thank you soo much.. Love, peace and happiness to you my friend :) :* will visit you soon..

Richard Lamoureux November 10, 2015 at 6:26 AM Beautiful, this feels like a song. Punnia Viswan Bhatia November 10, 2015 at 9:05 AM Thank you Richard for stopping by and leaving a beautiful comment.. :) God bless :))