Dr. Vandana Sharma Poet Kimo

Songs of Dawn

Dawn spreads her wings upon valleys and hills
humming to the tranquil brook
songs of misty morrow

scarlet, crimson, pink flowers sway along
like dancing ballerinas
to a beautiful day



Honorable mention
BiteSize Contest no.117 
Sponsored by: Line Gauthier

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Sara Kendrick October 6, 2025 at 2:59 PM Congratulations on your winning work in the contest. Way to go. I like the way you personified dawn. Sara K

Valsa George September 22, 2025 at 9:41 PM A lovely morn ! It is sweet to imagine dawn coming on wings singing songs to the tranquil brook. Dr. Vandana Sharma September 24, 2025 at 6:04 AM nature is the best poetry.................

Darlene De Beaulieu September 1, 2025 at 3:19 PM Hello Dr. Vandana, i like the last verse. i like the line dancing ballerinas. i can see her dancing. in my imagination. Hugs. Darlene De Beaulieu September 14, 2025 at 10:33 AM Hello Dr, Van dana, I like your poem. the last verse the part where you put the dancing ballerina. I love ballet. sothe last verse meant something to me. Hugs. /Darlene/ Dr. Vandana Sharma September 14, 2025 at 6:48 AM :)

Vanya Evangeline July 29, 2025 at 8:55 AM Love the imagery of the morning sky as wings. Well done. Dr. Vandana Sharma July 29, 2025 at 8:58 AM Thank you!!

Anisha Dutta July 19, 2025 at 6:21 AM Enjoy beautiful dawn. Where do you stay ? Dr. Vandana Sharma July 19, 2025 at 6:51 AM Thanks.

Andrea Dietrich July 16, 2025 at 12:43 PM very beautiful! Dr. Vandana Sharma July 16, 2025 at 9:59 PM Thank you

Darlene De Beaulieu July 11, 2025 at 10:07 AM Hello Dr. Vandana, Listening to the birds sing in the early morning is a delightful way to wake up. Hugs. /Darlene/ Darlene De Beaulieu July 12, 2025 at 10:22 AM Hello Dr. Vandana, i do agree. Enjoy your day my friend. /Daarlene/ Dr. Vandana Sharma July 11, 2025 at 8:03 PM Nature's song is the best way to start the day.