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Songs of a Dark Dawn

Yesterday we caught rainbows and we learned that the waters of time may leave us high and dry Does it bother you to learn that our cool eyes have turned inwards Does it bother you to know that ice and steam are opposites? Well - dance with me on clouds Kiss me as we watch the moons circling the planets This solar system is our home!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009




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Date: 4/2/2009 6:23:00 PM
Thank you for sharing this dance on the clouds, Matthew. Love the images of the bodies that comprise our "solar system." Very nice writing!
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Date: 3/2/2009 8:56:00 AM
I love poems like this . I like the line 'dance with me on clouds' and 'Kiss me as we watch the moons circling the planets...Sweet..
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Date: 2/24/2009 4:14:00 AM
Love your upbeat and hopeful attitude, as always. Your words are magic. Love, Shar
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Date: 2/23/2009 6:54:00 PM
This is a great write...so full of hope, promise, introspection and invitation! Donna G.
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