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Song of The White Willow No 6: AABB

Venture advances, the future ... occurs,
the White Willow trees, best found by rivers
edge. Salix alba, and 'Tristis' means sad,
hence, 'Weeping', yet the essence seems to add
a picturesque of a draped graceful scene,
nay gloomy but most tranquil, and serene.
The whitish tones of the leaf's undersides
evolved the tree's name. A meter trunk, wide's,
diameter, thirty-meter stretch that
leans caused by sloped limbs that bring its Top Hat
tilted downward. A bow ... accentuates,
or curtsey, being a deciduous
tree, where the flower's genders grow distinct,
genteel parade cascades in white trimmed linked.

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Sotto Poet Date: 1/11/2024 11:47:00 AM Your poem is about the beauty and grace of the White Willow tree, specifically focusing on its appearance and characteristics. The subject revolves around the descriptive portrayal of the tree, highlighting its physical features and the emotions it evokes. Using specific botanical terms such as "Salix alba" to convey a sense of expertise. You also employ alliteration in "graceful scene" and personification in "A bow... accentuates, or curtsey," adding depth to this great poem. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 1/11/2024 4:16:00 PM Thank you so very kindly, Lasaad. Your words are so defining and worthy of praise, my friend. Your sincereity was an encouraging affirmation, Cheers. Aloha, William

Hiya Sharma Date: 1/11/2024 3:45:00 AM Wow, a quite artistic sonnet this is, dear William.. Your songs of flora continue to bewitch as now, the adventure has landed in the realm of 'White Willows'. Ah, this one actually is so fascinating and intriguing both in the terms of its information and how wonderfully you've articulated those thoughts in a poetic way.. Your writing style is unique and you present your ideas so beautifully.. Enjoyed reading this, keep writing and shining always ~ :) Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 1/11/2024 10:23:00 AM A measured ray of light shines, Hiya. It pleases me to no end that yours encourages others to maintain the course they've undertaken as writers of poetry, thank you, my friend. Aloha, William

Silent One Date: 1/10/2024 10:42:00 AM Another great sonnet my friend.. It seamlessly blends scientific knowledge with artistic expression, offering readers a sensory experience of the White Willow trees. The language is rich and descriptive, and the poem successfully captures the essence and beauty of these trees in a way that is both informative and aesthetically pleasing.. Login to Reply Hilo Poet Date: 1/10/2024 11:57:00 AM Wow, that's a thensome review, my friend. I am genuinely pleased with your intensifying yellow brick road assessment, Silent One. I'm quite impressed, Cheers and Aloha, William