Song of the Stream

The flowing stream choruses,
As it's breath hits the banks,
Whistling one wish,
Give me one,
When we're done,
Give me one,
I pray thee,

Oh fairest of all,
Embrace my freshness,
Rub me over yourself,
Let me flow,
Down the deep valley of your back,
Over the hills of your waist,
Through the crack in-between,
Give me one,
When we're done,
Give me one,
I pray thee,

The white foam,
Flowing down your towers,
Through your forest,
Between the pillars,
Makes me jealous,
Envious,
For I want one,
When we're done,
Give me one,
I pray thee,

Let the thicket birds,
Fly away with thy dress,
For thou art fair,oh my bare,
Let the forest beasts,
Scare away intruders,
For I am there,Oh my bare,
That you may give me one,
When we're done,
Give me one,
I pray thee,

Now my waves are gentle and still,
Please take a dip and stay,
Let my fish sing,
Let my reeds cling,
Let the waves record over the bed,
This one,
When we're done,
For I'm not sure,
If you'll ever bathe here,
...Again....

Word Craft
2013
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013

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Madonsela Avatar
February 20, 2013 at 4:09 AM
such beauty, the poem was uplifting and refreshing, it had intriging sense of rythm that was simply moving. I loved it! *smiles* Ron
Ougo Avatar
February 21, 2013 at 1:06 AM
Thanks Ronny for the lifting sentiments :-)
Lucas Mcclure Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:56 AM
Beautiful! I enjoyed reading your poem today! Lori
Ougo Avatar
February 19, 2013 at 1:27 AM
Thanks Lori...i'm glad you liked it..do have beautiful moments too thanks..:-)
Trifiatis Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 3:55 AM
May the murmur of your stream join the muse of poetry In exalting your inspirational writing!
Ougo Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:20 AM
when the views are poetic in themselves..i guess i can only take them humbled...Thank you Sir..i'm most grateful..and do have yourself a wonderful weekend..thank you :-)
Andresen Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 3:37 AM
- It's not just good ..... it's very beautiful ... you are skilled and I like your poems Word ! - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Ougo Avatar
February 15, 2013 at 4:15 AM
am deeply humbled Anne...May you have a beautiful weekend too...your work inspires a lot...and i'm learning a lot, thank you again :-)
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