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Song of the Stream

The flowing stream choruses, As it's breath hits the banks, Whistling one wish, Give me one, When we're done, Give me one, I pray thee, Oh fairest of all, Embrace my freshness, Rub me over yourself, Let me flow, Down the deep valley of your back, Over the hills of your waist, Through the crack in-between, Give me one, When we're done, Give me one, I pray thee, The white foam, Flowing down your towers, Through your forest, Between the pillars, Makes me jealous, Envious, For I want one, When we're done, Give me one, I pray thee, Let the thicket birds, Fly away with thy dress, For thou art fair,oh my bare, Let the forest beasts, Scare away intruders, For I am there,Oh my bare, That you may give me one, When we're done, Give me one, I pray thee, Now my waves are gentle and still, Please take a dip and stay, Let my fish sing, Let my reeds cling, Let the waves record over the bed, This one, When we're done, For I'm not sure, If you'll ever bathe here, ...Again.... Word Craft 2013

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Date: 2/20/2013 4:09:00 AM
such beauty, the poem was uplifting and refreshing, it had intriging sense of rythm that was simply moving. I loved it! *smiles* Ron
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Date: 2/21/2013 1:06:00 AM
Thanks Ronny for the lifting sentiments :-)
Date: 2/15/2013 4:56:00 AM
Beautiful! I enjoyed reading your poem today! Lori
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Date: 2/19/2013 1:27:00 AM
Thanks Lori...i'm glad you liked it..do have beautiful moments too thanks..:-)
Date: 2/15/2013 3:55:00 AM
May the murmur of your stream join the muse of poetry In exalting your inspirational writing!
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Date: 2/15/2013 4:20:00 AM
when the views are poetic in themselves..i guess i can only take them humbled...Thank you Sir..i'm most grateful..and do have yourself a wonderful weekend..thank you :-)
Date: 2/15/2013 3:37:00 AM
- It's not just good ..... it's very beautiful ... you are skilled and I like your poems Word ! - Have a beautiful weekend! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/15/2013 4:15:00 AM
am deeply humbled Anne...May you have a beautiful weekend too...your work inspires a lot...and i'm learning a lot, thank you again :-)

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