Song of the Mountain Climber

the mountain is high
it's filled with stones,
the rocky slope
is prone to storms...

the peak is high
but you need to climb,
hurdles are many
but you can pass them and smile..

the icy cold wind
may chill your spine,
you may feel lonely
in the tall forest of pines...

but the peak is near,
you cannot give up,
be steady and strong,
though the route is rough...

as long as you aim
to climb above,
no one can break you
so just be tough...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Agustin Avatar
October 7, 2024 at 5:33 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 19, 2016 at 10:06 PM
angelina, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
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December 20, 2015 at 3:15 PM
A T, stopped by to enjoy some of the best poems and poets of 2010 - 1015 :) Hope you are well enjoying what is left of 2015. Sending an early Christmas Message with Hugs. May you have a blessed Christmas and a happy New Year. Good luck in all you do during 2016. ~SKAT LOVE~
Andresen Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 11:38 AM
I like your beautiful poem. - Have a nice weekend. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
Panthoiren Avatar
June 3, 2012 at 1:54 AM
Hmmm... love it! Keep on writing. :-)
Tongbram Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 11:05 AM
thank u.. i sure will continue.. hopefully better 1s.. :)
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May 12, 2012 at 5:44 AM
I have to agree with Marlon..this is a message we all need to hear..thank you for sharing it..enjoyed the uplift!!! INK-U-SCRIPT
Tongbram Avatar
October 27, 2012 at 11:03 AM
i'm glad u enjoyed it.. :)
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