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Song of The Hot Lips No 12: AABB

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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Couplet
Inspired: 2024 February 11
Image: Hot Lips by Valentine GR
 
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And pollen to pollinate -- love now sells, and mostly with this big kisser that tells its real name is 'Hot Lips' just by looking. Made Margaret Houlihan nicknaming famous, played by Loretta Swift, actress, on MASH, no longer on TV unless seen on reruns. They grow in the jungles of the two lower America's. Goals, you're halfway there, don't you have a mouth, WELL! Arrggh!, Learn the lingo, cross the border--Sall! Mean senora ... Senora? Nah! Hombre. Hombre? Si hombre, LIPS, ugly, hombre, like you! They'll carry you across--you'll pass. They'll pity you, or, think you're a bad a**!

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Date: 2/11/2024 1:50:00 PM
What a stunning flower; you're poem does it just for sure...and the ending was witty. Enjoyed the read, Sara
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Date: 2/11/2024 2:43:00 PM
Poetic devices hopefully should include sarcasm and irony <~~ho-hum dispensers. Thanks Sara as l assert a bit of optimism Aloha, William

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