Song of The Hot Lips No 12: AABB

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Poetic Form: Crown of Sonnets: Couplet

Inspired: 2024 February 11

Image: Hot Lips by Valentine GR

And pollen to pollinate -- love now sells,
and mostly with this big kisser that tells
its real name is 'Hot Lips' just by looking.
Made Margaret Houlihan nicknaming
famous, played by Loretta Swift, actress,
on MASH, no longer on TV unless
seen on reruns. They grow in the jungles
of the two lower America's. Goals,
you're halfway there, don't you have a mouth, WELL!
Arrggh!, Learn the lingo, cross the border--Sall!
Mean senora ... Senora? Nah! Hombre.
Hombre? Si hombre, LIPS, ugly, hombre,
like you! They'll carry you across--you'll pass.
They'll pity you, or, think you're a bad a**!

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