Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Poet Dizain

Song of Stars

Over trite words, wind resounds song of stars
to soothe ‘neath a diamond-encrusted sky.
When dawn’s pastel sun shines down from afar,
We’ll remember our twinkling lullaby. 
Eve’s cradle song transcends sun’s birthing cries.

A newborn horizon filters fresh light. 
Morn breaks too soon, solar display’s contrite.
As sun of broad blues coaxes us out, lest
we retreat in night; our souls to recite
wondrous chorus of glory through darkness.

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Laura Breidenthal May 13, 2015 at 1:27 AM I love the scope of color, the vivid imagery is astounding. "As sun of broad blues coaxes us out, lest we retreat in night; our souls to recite wondrous chorus of glory through darkness." I'm in awe... wow... I also love the line: "Eve’s cradle song transcends sun’s birthing cries"...amazing work Rhonda. It really soothed my mind tonight. A much needed relaxation! Always, Laura

Constance La France April 29, 2015 at 6:31 PM Rhonda, a soothing shining write, full of captivating phrasing of words 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, a day

Connie Marcum Wong April 29, 2015 at 2:36 PM The evenings have been cool here and the skies clear, perfect for stargazing. I enjoyed this lovely reflective poem that indeed sings with your carfully chosen words Rhonda.

Ravi Sathasivam April 29, 2015 at 2:05 AM Excellent. Well penned. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs