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Song of Spring

Spring in her step, she’s stepped into spring; Long silence lapsing, she’s longing to sing. Keying the lock, she unlocks the keys, Soothing sweet sonnets, soft melodies. Tuning her pitch, she pitches her tune; Heavenly choirs, splendidly crooned. Flirting with flowers, she flits through the hours, Blossoming, blooming, testing her powers. Birthing, unearthing breathtaking views; Ballooning, expanding, melodious muse. Loamy rich overtones, lavish, lush spoils, Overtures plenty - turned in the soil. Pleasantly following phonic pursuits, Soulful production of flavorful fruits. Knowingly rises, ascended, arose; A rose’s sweet scent awakens the nose. Arranged like a rainfall, like bells on a roof; Sonically soaring - aloft, not aloof. Like slipping through sieves with clever deceiving, Looming in view, a loom that she’s weaving. Minding her time, she needs no reminding; Bound for a spell, she’s simply spellbinding. Taking a breather, she puts on the brakes. Shuttering shuddering, tremulous shakes; Tenacious timbre, tremendous takes, A garden of glorious growth in her wake. ----------
for the 2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 20 Poetry Contest sponsored by Mark Toney written 03/21/2022

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Date: 3/21/2022 10:56:00 AM
I really like the thoughts and the symbolism in this masterpiece. Jeff, your wording is just great. Have a wonderful Monday.
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Jeff Kyser
Date: 3/21/2022 11:06:00 AM
Thanks, I hope you have a blessed day as well!
Date: 3/21/2022 8:34:00 AM
Way to go! Jeff. You have written a wonderful piece with alliterative couplets. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 3/21/2022 11:08:00 AM
Surprised with the result, I was trying for more of the chiasmus, but instead of getting nested deep as I had hoped, ended up with a bunch used within the couplets. On a bit of a kick with the idea of the verb and the noun being different things (e.g., rose, tune, etc.)

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