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- Song of Solomon In New Suit -

Memories, dust and ashes
- the power of eternity's love and desire
Nothing has changed for thousands of years
  "Love is better than wine"
A bottle of wine contains a lot of philosophy
- free from erotic desire
Let the roots grow in a cedar tree

The Song of Solomon
a ballad ...
of love and longing

With a humble mind
in purity, truth and love
Divine grace -
the power that illuminates the soul
A state of peace that almost is
beyond human understanding

The Song of Solomon
a ballad ...
of love and longing

 
Daughter of Jerusalem,
a beauty of the divine
His heart - like soft chimes
Wrap his beautiful virgin in silk and myrrh
One beautiful passionate love story
A man and a woman become one
Everything is placed in the hands of God







09/13/2019
Sun :) - A-L Andresen :)
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Romios Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 8:02 AM
Wow and wow+++++ A winner! Panagiota.xx
Andresen Avatar
October 2, 2019 at 1:56 PM
- Many thanks for visiting and comment, Panagiota :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Devonshire Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 12:31 PM
Your psalm is lovely, Sunshine. I don't know how the sponsor ranked these poems as all of the one's I've seen are beautifully written. Congratulations, dear friend. Hugs, carolyn
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 12:57 PM
- It came at least on the list, Carolyn :) - Many thanks for your kind support and congratulations :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Kauffman Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 12:07 PM
Such a lovely and tender Psalm with such beautiful images! Congratulations on your placement.
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 12:53 PM
- Many thanks for the lovely comment and congratulations, Sam :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 10:44 AM
This was like desert to finish off a savoury meal perfectly. I’m glad you added your sweetness. Congrats on your win. Hugs Rick
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 11:08 AM
- Many thanks for lovely comments and congrats, Richard :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 26, 2019 at 11:30 PM
Congrats on your winning psalm and I appreciate your entering it. God bless you always
Andresen Avatar
September 27, 2019 at 2:02 AM
- Many thanks for a great contest and my place on the winning list, Regina :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 18, 2019 at 12:31 PM
Hi Anne- Lise, You a good job with the contest challenge. I wish you the best contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis
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September 18, 2019 at 2:01 PM
- Many thanks Alexis, for the lovely comment :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Rodrigues Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 8:36 PM
A lovely psalm, sweet poet!
Andresen Avatar
September 15, 2019 at 6:12 AM
- Thank you very much, Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Ball Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 12:52 PM
Excellent my friend. Absolutely beautiful. God Bless and good luck. JB
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 2:56 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comments, Judy :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 14, 2019 at 9:28 AM
A wonderful spiritual story of the Song of Solomon - a beautiful rendition of this Psalm - I love the Psalms of the Old Testament. Good luck in the contest my dear friend. Hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 2:56 PM
- Many thanks for lovely comments, Jenny :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Lamoureux Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 9:05 AM
You did this so well! Hugs Rick.
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 2:55 PM
- Richard, thank you very much :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Michael Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 8:03 PM
The songs of Solomon...I like his readings...You capture the essence here...
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 2:54 PM
- Thank you very much, Arturo :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Adams Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 6:44 PM
oh how i wish i could write this beautifully... gorgeous poetry my friend, simply gorgeous....loved that first verse! :) hugs
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September 14, 2019 at 2:53 PM
- Glad you enjoyed it ... thank you very much, Sandra :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
September 13, 2019 at 5:20 PM
Beautifully done Anne. Good luck and have a good weekend. Tom
Andresen Avatar
September 14, 2019 at 2:51 PM
- Many thanks, Tom ... have a lovely weekend :) - hugs / Anne-Lise :)
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