Get Your Premium Membership

Song of Ocarina

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=lR8BaGbOoL8 Oh sweet, sweet, dance of summer you are here at last yes I would like to climb to the top of your hill There you can tell me more about the breeze that flies me free for I am old enough to love your steps and young enough to try Oh sweet, sweet, dance of summer you are here at last; Bring me your charms and all your steps, I am ready to advance pushing forward like the flower, bathing in the orange sun I am on the summit of your summer , ready to graze the verdant hills of my life , once more ; Far in the distance I hear the song of Ocarina, and I watch as he plays the golden flute; Softly and keenly the spirit follows the groove of his tune while the sun rises freely, o'er the mountain until noon Oh sweet, sweet, dance of summer you are here at last give me the song of Ocarina, so I can dance on your festoon.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2020




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 7/1/2020 8:58:00 AM
A beautiful cheerful muse of innocent desires in music of summer! Congratulations on your win for this splendid write. Keep writing and inspiring :)
Login to Reply
Date: 6/29/2020 9:59:00 PM
"Sweet, sweet dance of summer..."--wonderfully entertaining, well done indeed, and my compliments for being recognized for your efforts, achieving 1st Place, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2020 1:45:00 PM
Quite an accomplishment with so few notes to work with! Aloha! Rico
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2020 12:07:00 PM
This flows like a bright dance of joy, especially like the 'summer of your summer' and the repeating of the first line is very effective in tying it all together-
Login to Reply
Date: 6/27/2020 6:50:00 AM
Loved the bounce of your words dancing with joy--lovely creation, Vienna.
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things