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Song of Native Americans

Take me to the hill from which the rainbow rises to pay ancestors’ tribute. Share the memories handed down by mighty chiefs, warriors who loved the land. Harmony once reigned between their tribes and nature until white men invaded. Interstates now run through our backyards -- urban sprawl. Endangered is our future.
*Entry for Chris's contest, but originally written for Rick's "Ancient Songs" contest.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 11/24/2011 3:34:00 PM
Real good work here Carolyn,, i will wish you the best of placements my friend "until next time"
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Date: 11/23/2011 8:35:00 AM
Carolyn, your voice is strong...still, in the Twin Cities area, constantly, construction crews are uncovering sacred burial grounds by mistake, with court battles deciding outcomes....my preference....to always err on the side of Native wishes ....mebbe Their Ancestors will smile upon me....I'll keep tryin' eneway....jmg
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Date: 11/22/2011 9:29:00 PM
i like this piece of work here my dear friend
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Date: 11/19/2011 8:32:00 PM
carolyn, I think you may have come about the closest to doing this contest how he wanted . I am still unsure if I did it right! GREAT job.
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Date: 11/19/2011 3:11:00 PM
Beautiful and sensitive write, my friend
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Date: 11/19/2011 1:44:00 PM
Sad but true. :-( Good luck :-)
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Date: 11/19/2011 1:33:00 PM
How true. What a great tribute to the first nations. Loved it. Hope it places high. God Bless, JB
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