Song of My Heart

Holding you close to my heart, I will sing a song
The songs tune is you
In eyes without seeing  In heart without knowing
The picture that blossoms is You
Please Come
as this song’s raaga
Please Give this picture in colors
Gave love which showered from my heart to you moonlit dusk
In return making my eyes wet, where have you disappeared
Holding you close to my heart, I will sing a song
The songs tune is you
In eyes without seeing  In heart without knowing
The picture that blossoms is You
When  my desires flutters its wings to see you 
You became a wind of love caressing me
In the words of eyes , only your face remained
In the eyes of dreams, there is only your color
Don’t disappear away, away, away
Holding you close to my heart, I will sing a song
The songs tune is you
The poems which were written to recite
became Hindolam**  that blossomed in your lips
Oceans and rains gave only your voice
In thought’s shadows your breaths
Searching near, where are you now
Holding you close to my heart, I will sing a song
The songs tune is you 
In eyes without seeing
In heart without knowing


            vinayak pratap

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013



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Date: 9/29/2013 12:28:00 PM
Excellent, Vinayak. Nice going. Congrats. Ralph
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/29/2013 9:32:00 PM
Thanks Ralph
Date: 9/28/2013 2:46:00 PM
Vinayak, love your winning poem ......... LOVE ~SKAT~
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/29/2013 9:33:00 PM
nice to know you like it skat ~V~
Date: 9/28/2013 12:02:00 PM
great job ! I love it ! Wonderful Win !!
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/29/2013 9:33:00 PM
thank you Kelley
Date: 9/28/2013 5:35:00 AM
Congrats on the win in the contest, vinayak
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/29/2013 9:31:00 PM
thank you mr mehta
Date: 9/27/2013 7:51:00 PM
Vinayak, Congratulations on your "Beloved Poem" win. xox~ LINDA
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/27/2013 11:09:00 PM
thank you Linda ~V~
Date: 9/18/2013 7:36:00 AM
Awesome poem! Love it! Well written. Love all the emotions!
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/20/2013 1:42:00 AM
THANK YOU FOR YOUR WONDERFUL REVIEW
Date: 8/30/2013 8:15:00 AM
beautiful song
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 9/20/2013 1:43:00 AM
thank you Vandana
Date: 8/28/2013 5:50:00 PM
Hi Vinayak, my fav line...You became a wind of love caressing me.... thank you for stopping by.... keep that tune in your heart going..this poem is xool....luv~ Linda
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Date: 8/28/2013 5:43:00 AM
NICE
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Date: 8/28/2013 5:20:00 AM
practically a nice poem..... :)
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Vinayak Pratap
Date: 8/28/2013 5:23:00 AM
oh thnx buddy
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