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Song of My Heart

rhythmic
melody flows
downbeats my emotions
murmuring purrs within my soul
heart felt
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Kauffman Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 10:41 AM
In five lines, John, so many wonderful images - "murmuring purrs!" This is indeed "heart felt." Congrats and high fives!
Anderson Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 11:33 AM
Thanks very much, best wishes to you
Andresen Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 2:03 AM
- Congratulations on your lovely poem in the contest "Song of my heart" - hugs
Anderson Avatar
June 13, 2023 at 11:34 AM
Thanks very much. I appreciate your comment. Cheers
Kaufman Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 2:05 PM
I know you wrote this a few days ago but it's really very well done.
Anderson Avatar
June 4, 2023 at 2:50 PM
Thanks and best wishes
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