Meenakshi Raina Poet Sijo

Song of Life

Life is now broken piano, rhythm lost in isolation 
    Keys of happiness are silent, waiting for some miracle 
        Praying for fear to end, and song of life is written again



June 09, 2020.
Let the Pens Flow - Sijo (15 syllables per line)
Sponsor- Jenish Somadas

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Jennifer Fenn February 8, 2021 at 11:40 AM Neat! I’ve never heard of a sijo. I’ll have to look up that form.

Sand Blown July 24, 2020 at 10:44 PM nice one...there was a famous piano-tuner-composer in europe (last century_ who could play classics on an out of tune piano perfectly....by playing the wrong keys..........stan sand

Estela Canama July 3, 2020 at 4:27 AM A wonderful poem to reflect on!

Darlene De Beaulieu June 29, 2020 at 2:39 PM Hello Sijo, this is great! Enjoy your day my friend.

Andrea Dietrich June 13, 2020 at 6:39 PM this is outstanding sijo. A fave! Meenakshi Raina June 21, 2020 at 7:24 PM Thank you Andrea!

Kim Rodrigues June 12, 2020 at 8:35 AM Beautifully penned! Congratulations, Meenakshi! Meenakshi Raina June 21, 2020 at 7:24 PM Thank you Kim!

Aditi Mishra June 12, 2020 at 6:49 AM Heartfelt words that conclude on a hopeful note. Congratulations on your well-deserved win Meenakshi :) Blessings. Meenakshi Raina June 21, 2020 at 7:25 PM Thank you Aditi!

Jenish Somadas June 11, 2020 at 2:34 PM Beautifully penned.. Congrats on your great win Meenakshi.. Meenakshi Raina June 21, 2020 at 7:26 PM Thank you Jenish!