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Song of Forgiveness

SONG OF FORGIVENESS Warmth and beauty under blue sky, but heavy clouds within burst and cry. From a thunderous mind, that let unwind, causing a heart, to tear apart. A PLEA TO FORGIVE, FOR THIS SOUL TO LIVE, ONLY FORGIVENESS WILL SAVE TOMORROW, WITH THIS HEART AND SOUL IN SORROW. Caused a love to burn, and a soft soul to turn, now spiritually beginning to churn, with a stain from an unforgiving pain. A PLEA TO FORGIVE, FOR THIS SOUL TO LIVE, ONLY FORGIVENESS WILL SAVE TOMORROW, WITH THIS HEART AND SOUL IN SORROW. That raging mind that makes one blind, a shredded page scattered on our living stage. Words of fire, that fought, then the ashes of regretful thought. A PLEA TO FORGIVE, FOR THIS SOUL TO LIVE, ONLY FORGIVENESS WILL SAVE TOMORROW, WITH THIS HEART AND SOUL IN SORROW. Please, please on these begging knees, and see the pain, from these bleeding eyes, and a heart beating, sobbing sighs, Don't turn away, from a memory this way A PLEA TO FORGIVE, FOR THIS SOUL TO LIVE, ONLY FORGIVENESS WILL SAVE TOMORROW, WITH THIS HEART AND SOUL IN SORROW

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Date: 9/12/2019 5:17:00 PM
A very emotive piece, Edmund, nicely written. I liked the way you varied the rhyme scheme from stanza to stanza, it made an interesting read. All the best, John
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Edmund Strempfl
Date: 9/12/2019 9:39:00 PM
Thank you so much for your great comment. I do try to vary in subject and format but still maintain my style, but also like to try and capture the reader
Date: 9/9/2019 6:59:00 PM
A very deep plea. Powerful and again meaningful. Reaches the reader :)
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Edmund Strempfl
Date: 9/9/2019 7:24:00 PM
Thank you so very much for your compliment

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