Song Not Done

Buttons on your blouse

                            played like soft piano keys                 

                                                          as our song is felt...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
September 21, 2010 at 4:26 AM
I love the idea of the buttons being played like piano keys.. Brilliant write Michael, lv Wilma
Knop Avatar
September 19, 2010 at 6:48 AM
hi Michael, so well penned Senryu! Enjoyed the read this afternoon! All the best my friend and thank you for your kind comments!...Gert
Brown Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 9:19 AM
As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Michael. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol
Mehta Avatar
September 17, 2010 at 6:14 AM
Very romantic and sensuous write in short write, Michael
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September 17, 2010 at 6:05 AM
sensuous poem.....enjoyed!!
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September 16, 2010 at 7:15 PM
Oh, so passionate, Michael. Very creatively worded and romantic senryu. Excellent! Love, Carolyn
Kendrick Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 4:21 PM
Lightly written with great romance..Enjoyed the reading of your work..Sara
Roberts Avatar
September 16, 2010 at 4:12 PM
ooh love it
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September 16, 2010 at 4:06 PM
nice write, enjoyed your poetry..P.D.
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September 16, 2010 at 4:03 PM
Splendid piece of poetry Michael and a wonderful romantic Senryu.. an intimate picture of what is to come later... in your lines.. how ironic I just posted "Intimate"..oh our minds are working so alike tonight..luv.. raining where u are? pouring like crazy here with all the components..too..
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