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Song Not Done

Buttons on your blouse played like soft piano keys as our song is felt...

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Wilma Neels

Date: 9/21/2010 4:26:00 AM

I love the idea of the buttons being played like piano keys.. Brilliant write Michael, lv Wilma

Gert W. Knop

Date: 9/19/2010 6:48:00 AM

hi Michael, so well penned Senryu! Enjoyed the read this afternoon! All the best my friend and thank you for your kind comments!...Gert

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 9:19:00 AM

As the week ends I find myself reading and enjoying the many diverse poems here at PoetrySoup today. I am glad to see your poetry among these Michael. Have a wonderful weekend. Love, Carol

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 6:14:00 AM

Very romantic and sensuous write in short write, Michael

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 9/17/2010 6:05:00 AM

sensuous poem.....enjoyed!!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2010 7:15:00 PM

Oh, so passionate, Michael. Very creatively worded and romantic senryu. Excellent! Love, Carolyn

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/16/2010 4:21:00 PM

Lightly written with great romance..Enjoyed the reading of your work..Sara

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/16/2010 4:12:00 PM

ooh love it

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/16/2010 4:06:00 PM

nice write, enjoyed your poetry..P.D.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/16/2010 4:03:00 PM

Splendid piece of poetry Michael and a wonderful romantic Senryu.. an intimate picture of what is to come later... in your lines.. how ironic I just posted "Intimate"..oh our minds are working so alike tonight..luv.. raining where u are? pouring like crazy here with all the components..too..